personal information that you want considered as part of your admissions application

Admission Essay DUE 10 Hours From Now

TOPIC:  There may be personal information that you want considered as part of your admissions application. Write an essay describing that information. You might include exceptional hardships, challenges, or opportunities that have shaped or impacted your abilities or academic credentials, personal responsibilities, exceptional achievements or talents, educational goals, or ways in which you might contribute to an institution committed to creating a diverse learning environment.

I attached the essay meaning that similar to mine.

My name is Vepa Ashyrov

I was born in Ashgabat, Turkmenistan. (5th dictator country)

My 2 year college is Richland College. I’m also working there to pay my bills.

My plan is transferring to University of Texas at Dallas and get my Bachelor Degree in Computer Science.

Hope you write an emotional essay.